Comments on: Excerpt – Poles Apart http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com Writer Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:30:26 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Michael Cogdill http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/poles-apart-a-sample/#comment-15 Michael Cogdill Sat, 28 Nov 2009 03:30:26 +0000 http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/?page_id=4#comment-15 Audrey, what a magnetic sense of wonder you raise up in us here. BRAVO. Few write intimacy so well. I'm especially drawn to this: “Ptoi, ptoi.” Frieda chased the dream through her fingers and away. “Alright, tell me.” Your prose reminds me of what Hemingway achieved with In Our Time. It rings with the feel of having been there, steeped in the breath and motion of the room, never far from the wake of a character's thought, willing to let the movement of thought pull you -- and your reader -- deeper into the world of the play. Finely done! I wonder what gave rise to this story in you! Thank you, also, for your kind words about She-Rain. More to come on the blog and on FiledBy -- excerpts, a trailer, more reviews -- before launch. Follow us on! Audrey, what a magnetic sense of wonder you raise up in us here. BRAVO. Few write intimacy so well. I’m especially drawn to this:

“Ptoi, ptoi.” Frieda chased the dream through her fingers and away. “Alright, tell me.”

Your prose reminds me of what Hemingway achieved with In Our Time. It rings with the feel of having been there, steeped in the breath and motion of the room, never far from the wake of a character’s thought, willing to let the movement of thought pull you — and your reader — deeper into the world of the play. Finely done!

I wonder what gave rise to this story in you!

Thank you, also, for your kind words about She-Rain. More to come on the blog and on FiledBy — excerpts, a trailer, more reviews — before launch. Follow us on!

]]> By: Carin http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/poles-apart-a-sample/#comment-5 Carin Tue, 14 Jul 2009 13:18:47 +0000 http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/?page_id=4#comment-5 What beautiful characters! I am so looking forward to knowing more about Chaim and Frieda. You really have a gift for painting a picture with words. I love this chapter! Thanks for sharing it! What beautiful characters! I am so looking forward to knowing more about Chaim and Frieda. You really have a gift for painting a picture with words.
I love this chapter! Thanks for sharing it!

]]> By: Terri http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/poles-apart-a-sample/#comment-3 Terri Fri, 03 Jul 2009 22:33:12 +0000 http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/?page_id=4#comment-3 Your website is awesome! You and Crystal did a fabulous job. Chapter One is poignant, beautiful. I'm happy for you. Your website is awesome!

You and Crystal did a fabulous job.

Chapter One is poignant, beautiful.

I’m happy for you.

]]> By: Thomas Smith http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/poles-apart-a-sample/#comment-2 Thomas Smith Fri, 03 Jul 2009 19:05:02 +0000 http://audreyrlwyatt.wordpress.com/?page_id=4#comment-2 Amazing characters...I must know more!!! Can't wait Audrey...you are truly gifted. XOXO THOMAS (Oy!) Amazing characters…I must know more!!! Can’t wait Audrey…you are truly gifted.

XOXO
THOMAS (Oy!)

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